Nice read here Miranda. I liked the energy you brought with the read, fun and silly. Matched the tone of the script well.

You did well with your articulations here but I want to give a few pointers. I want to take the speed of the read down across the board, gives us more time to fully appreciate each and every word. Look to the center of your read. The section "Our growing group of Graham scientists...best-est-est tast that will..." was spaced more to how I would want your whole read to be. You put spacing between just about each word in this section and gave yourself ample space to clearly and fully pronounce these words. The clarity we are going for is a level so clear that a 5 year old could read along the script with you just by listening to your voice. The beginning middle and ends of every word pronounced purposefully and deliberately.

We want to pronounce the entire script to the same level of clarity. We don't just want to slow down on the tricky sections, we want every word to have that same level care and articulation. There were a few spots where you would speed up the read a little and the clarity would go down as the speed went up, so be mindful of that when you are practicing articulation never to let speed get in the way of clarity.

A good solid read overall Miranda, good practice on the articulation and enunciation as well. Looking forward to hearing more from ya!