I like your voice and delivery, Taki. Great enunciation, too.👍🏻

HW Review:

You've got a little bit of sass in your voice and it's very fun to listen to. I love that you experimented a bit with the performance. If I were to have you do a second take, I'd love for you to really push hard into this sassy and confident character. It's a really fun choice!

Here's some areas of improvement that you can work towards:

Projection was the expectation with this script, and you've fallen short on this aspect of the performance. A sassy character like this could absolutely get loud. Make sure you are practicing with your diaphragm so you can work on your projection.

Remember that when you fumble, you shouldn't push through to finish the sentence. Stop, take a pause to recover, and then restart from the beginning of the sentence or from the nearest natural pause. Making a habit of this method will save you a lot of editing time in the future.

Be mindful of your mouth clicks and plosives (puffs of air that hit the mic and come through your recording as a "boom" sound). Hydrate, swallow, and distance yourself a little from your mic so those little sounds aren't picked up as easily.

You definitely approached this with a unique and fun idea, but your projection needs work. Focus on your projection and articulation first so you don't lose those important aspects when you hone into a performance.Keep practicing and you'll improve in no time!