Hang on Tentoe, slow down! The exercise here was to work on pronunciation, articulation, and clarity. I want you to go on back, cut the speed in half, and really exaggerate and articulate every. single. consonant. In this script. Space out your words so they don't tumble into each other. Watch the consonants inside of your words. we want clarity of the level that a 5 year old could listen to your voice and just about read the script with you just hearing your voice. You don't actually have to resubmit new audio or anything like that but I would like you to practice that purposeful and mindful slowing down. In this case the whole idea is to go painfully slowly. Giving each and every word room to breath and be heard. Every word gets space, every word gets articulated clearly. Refine and rehearse your control over your speed. Dictate, enunciate, and articulate as if teaching a child to read themselves. A nice read overall, just needs to be reigned in a bit!