Loved your zombie sounds and how joyous you made the script!!

HW Review:

Right off the bat, your projection is great! You have excellent power in your voice, even in some areas where the energy of the performance is rolled back. You manage your pacing in a way that works well with how much breath you are expending to maintain your projection through to the end of the script. The reason why it's important to manage your pacing is so that you can keep your stamina levels intact so you can continue to project without losing your breath.

You've got a pretty good grasp on your projection, let's talk about your articulation. The pacing works well for your breath control, but there's a few areas where the speed of your speech results in some blurring of words. Namely at 0:08 and 0:16.

You also find yourself catching on a few of the words in this script where you hesitate in your speech and it is clear to the listener that you're struggling to read something. Remember, when you find yourself stumbling on a word or a string of words, you can stop and restart from the beginning of the sentence or closest natural pause. Pushing through a flub only leaves you with a line that you would likely have to go back and record again anyway. It's best practice to simply pause and reread in the moment so it can be easily edited later.

Overall, I think you did a nice job with this script! I can tell that you had fun performing this (and the zombie was very well done!). I look forward to hearing your next HW submission!