I really enjoyed how every "free" off the top was very different. You really kept up the energy throughout the whole thing.

Nice work getting through the script! One thing to note is that you missed the very first part of the copy: “Quality value styles, service selection convenience, economy saving performance, experience hospitality, low rates, friendly service, name brands, easy terms with affordable prices, money back guaranteed and free installation.” That’s a significant chunk, so it’s important to listen back carefully before submitting. Catching every word ensures your read is complete, professional, and that nothing essential to the message is lost.

I also noticed that you were using a character voice throughout. This can be a fun creative choice if it fits the script, but it contributed to running out of breath towards the end. Breath support is critical because your diaphragm is what allows your voice to stay strong and consistent, especially for longer scripts or when conveying high energy. Running out of breath can make your performance feel rushed or disconnected. Strategically placing breath marks in your script will help you plan when to inhale, allowing you to maintain a natural flow without compromising your energy or clarity.

Your pacing was strong, and I appreciate that you took your time with the script; it made your delivery easier to follow. That said, I noticed your energy dips slightly when you stumble over words. Maintaining consistent energy from beginning to end is important because your audience connects more to the enthusiasm you bring than just the words themselves. Even small stumbles can unintentionally signal hesitation or lack of confidence, which can pull listeners out of the scene. Practicing techniques like the cork trick we discussed in class will help smooth out these moments and allow your energy to stay steady throughout.

All in all, this was a solid read. With more focus on breath support, careful word tracking, and keeping your energy consistent, your performance will feel more polished, professional, and engaging. These adjustments will help your reads resonate more and fully sell the scene or product to your audience.