You have a very smooth voice! You handled your mistakes well, picking back up quickly.

You have a wonderfully calm and smooth voice. Very nice to listen to. Great read here Zeph, though quite softspoken for what we were going for with the projection. We wanted to hear you screaming to the masses about how good this deal is! Selling to the entirety of Times Square about how insanely good these terms are! I'd call you at a cool 3/10 here. Pause, fill up your lungs and expand into the abdominal cavity, let rip full columns of air to buffet the roaring masses! I want to hear you get loud!

Your pacing was very controlled. Smooth and clear, the read was comfortable and casual. Firm control of your speed guided your audience through the lullaby, super well done even if not the style we intended for the script. Keep that same measured and controlled pace when dialing up the volume and getting loud, Support that volume by taking more breaks to breathe deep and get more air behind the words. And keep the same length of breath breaks too, son't let yourself become gaspy when reading loud.

This was such a relaxing and pleasant read Zeph, well delivered and well read. Looking forward to more, more, more! volume and reads going forward!