I liked the way you said 'just right for you' at 1:16; it felt personal and would do well in a commercial spot to grab the listener.

Extraordinarily clean read. Really just the 3 notes I had.

0:38 No purchases* not purchase

0:57 added "so" to script.

2:09 purchase again should be plural

Your pace was very well controlled. Delivered purposefully and serving to punctuate your choices. Loved the choices as well, you gave attention and articulation to specific lines within the read and that sells the performance of your character and just so much fun to hear. Slowing down to let the emphasis hit as well. Great work here!

Projection wise I'd say you were at a comfy 5-6/10, Fitting for a medium sized conference room but wouldn't quite cut it for a full sized gym or large conference room. Would love to hear you push some more air our and really fill that room! Take it to the back rows!

Circling back to the pacing and acting choices made, the breaking up of the long lists and repetitive lines was also very well done in my opinion. This is a near bulletproof read and most impressively done. That said, don't be afraid of letting us hear more of the rough takes when doing homework. Taking risks and leaving in mistakes gives us more to dig into and helps tailor feedback to shore up where we hear you making mistakes. That being said, nothing much left to say here other than a job most exquisitely well done M Sheep, looking forward to hearing more!