Wow love the tone here, classic advertising energy, I love it! You chose a great pace that works beautifully with the style of read that you went for here. Purposeful, measured, and confident. Well done.

In terms of projection, you sat a solid 5 I would say for the read. Perfect for a commercial advertisement, but would be a little quiet were you not miced speaking to a full gym. I'd love to get you to expand that volume range up, up, up! A wonderfully powerful voice like yours would sound amazing dialed up to a 7 or an 8! Commanding attention for certain! Draw in that air into your abdominal cavity, and push great columns of air out to really send the script to the audience!

Let's touch on the script itself too. While the read was solid, quite often you would drop the ends of your words, or say the wrong ending of a word. e.g. estimate instead of estimate*s, entry not entrée, purchase not purchases. Be very careful to read and deliver as written on the script. And when you inevitably do mess something up, because we all flub from time to time, don't just re-do the word that was messed up. Stop the read, go back up the script to a natural break, and take the whole line again. Re-doing just the word is impossible to edit and sound good, you gotta roll back up and find a break in the script. The end of a sentence or a comma for example.

Great read here Petey! I love the style and can't wait to hear more!