I like the choices you made here during your read. The inflections were great, good instincts. Just need a treated space, and you'd probably be set to knock out a bunch of auditions!

HW REVIEW

I LOVE that I can literally hear the smile in your voice! Great job with that! You're projection is strong and steady. Nice work pushing from your diaphragm. I like that you vary up the energy in a few spots. Changing up the "mood" of your voice avoids repetitiveness and keeps the listener engaged.

Thank you for recording in one take and keeping your fumbles in! Here's how you can manage your recording when you stumble over the script:

1. Don't push through the line over the fumble. When you fumble words in a script, that line essentially becomes unusable.

2. Stop, take a pause, gather yourself, and then restart the read from the nearest pause or from the beginning of the sentence.

Following those steps will give you (or whoever the engineer on the project is) a clean space to edit out the fumble and edit in the clean retake.

I really enjoyed this read. Beautiful job!