Would be great to know how you see/understand this for us to align our imaginings.The lower vocal placement gives some nice gravitas but also feels a bit forced and causes some flub/clarity challenges that it would be good to fix in real time, even if not to edit the probs out, just redo the problem area until you have a good edit option.Aim for 1s of deadspace at the top of your files, so that their isn't a long wait to hear you. Clients get impatient. Delivery gets a bit stilted and could be a reminder to go again for smoothing things out and getting into a flow that replicated the reality you see them in. We don't have insights on there here, but maybe you'd like to add a comment for context and we'd know more about what you imagined and are trying to achieve?