I remember doing this exercise haha nice job!

I would say your tone is warm and clear. I love how you kept the energy throughout the read even with taking breaths in between.

Excellent read!  I could definitely picture you doing e-learning, corporate reads, commercials, etc.

0:41 Read “entrée” as “entry”. 

0:44, 1:46, 2:13 Read “purchase” instead of “purchases” - be aware of changing words and dropping or adding “s”.

2:07 Mispronounced “genuine”. However, I could see the way you pronounced it being used in a character read for added flavor.

For the purpose of this homework to work on projection, I feel like there was room to go even further. Practice projecting even more such as with the scenario of being in a gym or large auditorium with no microphone and you need your voice to be heard in every single corner of the room. Engage with your diaphragm and take in a big, deep breath to fill up your lungs so that you have the power to push your voice out even further. 

Overall, fantastic read!