Not a bad audition at all! I appreciate you auditioning! I think at some points, some of the emotions needed a bit more like a jump to it like throw in a chuckle when you said "Dude its not gunna hurt him" and like with the "Yeah, yeah were comin'' line, it needed like a more rushed feel to it like your trying to blow off an annoying friend haha.

Honestly, though, man, you were solid! I did like your audition, thank you again!