First Impressions: Your articulation starts out very clear, and it remains consistent throughout most of the read! You have a warm and welcoming tone.

0:04 "Modeling" blurs a little into "Modling". When articulating, you want to make sure you clearly produce a sound for each syllable of a word. You hit the word a little more clearly 0:08.

0:25 At this point you start wavering on your breath control, which leads you to the point at 0:33 where you need to take a quick small breath, but it's not enough to sustain you, leading you to take a deep breath at 0:35. You don't give yourself enough time to recover your air, and you release a puff of air on the next word which "booms" into the mic, creating what we call a "plosive".

If you feel yourself running out of air, or find yourself taking breaths in awkward placements in the script; stop, allow yourself a couple of seconds to breath, recover, and reread the line again.

0:36 Said "Propituated instead of "Propitiated", pronounced "Pro-pih-shi-ated".

0:42 Great job giving ample space in between the items on this lit. Those natural but intentional "gaps" between listed items give you room to breath which lets you speak more clearly.

1:07 "Potter" sounds like "Podder". You do a pretty good job at keeping your D and T sounds crisp. This was the only instance where they blurred a bit and your articulation wasn't as sharp on the T.

1:12-1:15 Lots of tiny breaths taken here in this very small time. Practice giving yourself more air at the beginning of your sentences so you don't need to break up the sentence as often.

Final Thoughts: You're pretty spot-on with your T's and P's! I appreciate that you changed up your cadence a few times, but you do fall into a repetitive rhythm for most of the read, which is something to be mindful of when performing longer scripts like this one. Overall, nice work!