Great read here Joules, you've got a brilliant warmth in your natural speaking voice. Very pleasant, very welcoming. You have great pronunciation as well.

Your pacing is quite good you take your time and give yourself time to let the script breath which is great. Where you run aground is you had a tendency to begin to rush as your breath support started to run out. This led to you missing words, speeding up faster than you could read, and having your pronunciation take a hit. Your recovery for mistakes were good. You took a pause, rolled it back, and took it again. You don't necessarily need to take it from the top of a sentence, commas or other natural break points provide pit stops for you to tackle those devilish run on sentences. And otherwise you could manipulate your pacing to give yourself a pause point.

As for projection, I wanna hear you get that up up up! You've got this incredible deep and rich signature that's begging for some powerful strong air support! We're at a cool 4 and I want you to keep up the breathing exercises each week to build up that lung capacity and power! Let's get that up to at least a 5!

As your air support increases, your pacing and rushing will become far less prominent. Awesome read here and II can't wait to hear more through the weeks!