Excellent read!

0:12, 2:09 Read “guarantee” instead of “guaranteed” - be sure to fully pronounce the words including the ending sounds.

You may want to turn down your gain a little bit to make sure you’re not clipping on the wave form and getting that distortion at the louder parts. Suggest lowering the gain and adjusting your position so that your peaks for yelling/loud projection land between -9 dB and -3 dB. Try adjusting your microphone so that you speak just passed the mic at a slight offset to limit plosives. 

2:47 When you misread or have a little stumble (happens to everyone and it’s okay!), it’s highly encouraged to start again at the beginning of the sentence or paragraph or a point that would make it easy to remove and replace the mistake during editing. If you just keep going and don’t return to a solid point that makes it easy to edit out the mistake, you may need to come back later and re-record as a pick-up, and it becomes challenging to make it sound the same as the original recording. So, a good rule of thumb is to record so that it’s easy to edit later. When the mistakes are then edited out, it will sound like you read everything perfectly.

3:09 Read “decision” instead of “selection”

3:38 Skipped a section from “classic” to “premium”.

For the purpose of this homework to work on projection you did an excellent job! Overall, the words were well articulated and enunciated and clearly spoken. To take this read to the next level, find a way to connect with the script and lift the words off the page and bring them to life. Add emotion and opinion into the script.Think of something that you are genuinely excited about and bring that enthusiasm to your read. Keep up the great work!