Love the ferocity Juan! Great read here, phenomenal reading, I don't think I caught anything wrong in the read at all actually. You certainly attained a level of energy and intensity that I can get behind.

That said lets put some brakes on the train too. Your pacing is blitzing fast, and your pronunciation and articulation suffer for it. We can achieve that same energy and intensity level at a more relaxed pace. Currently your read sounds tense. Your words tumble into each other and get crowded coming out. Gives almost a frantic energy to the read. Slow it down, let the script breath, let yourself breath, let each word get its time in the sun to be heard and appreciated.

Speaking of heard, I can hear the attempt here at the projection and I love it, but you know I want more still. You've got a wonderful big 5 and I want to hear you hit a 7. Your hitting maybe the center row of people in the assembly but the jokers in the back are talking over you still and I want you to reach em and force them to listen to you! Take some nice big breathes, fill out the abdominal cavity, and use that diaphragm to send columns of air out to your audience.

You have a great welcoming and friendly natural speaking voice, great pairing for something commercial like this script. Give your voice and your read the time they deserve to be heard and appreciated. Lovely read here, looking forward to more!

Love the ferocity Juan! Great read here, phenomenal reading, I don't think I caught anything wrong in the read at all actually. You certainly attained a level of energy and intensity that I can get behind.

That said lets put some brakes on the train too. Your pacing is blitzing fast, and your pronunciation and articulation suffer for it. We can achieve that same energy and intensity level at a more relaxed pace. Currently your read sounds tense. Your words tumble into each other and get crowded coming out. Gives almost a frantic energy to the read. Slow it down, let the script breath, let yourself breath, let each word get its time in the sun to be heard and appreciated.

Speaking of heard, I can hear the attempt here at the projection and I love it, but you know I want more still. You've got a wonderful big 5 and I want to hear you hit a 7. You're hitting maybe the center row of people in the assembly but the jokers in the back are talking over you still and I want you to reach em and force them to listen to you! Take some nice big breathes, fill out the abdominal cavity, and use that diaphragm to send columns of air out to your audience.

You have a great welcoming and friendly natural speaking voice, great pairing for something commercial like this script. Give your voice and your read the time they deserve to be heard and appreciated. Lovely read here, looking forward to more!