I think you have a good commercial voice. It's a good speaking rhythm

Side note, love the name. I use Nexus mods to mod all my video games haha.

Ok, sweet read here, you have a very nice measured pace here. Took you pace, left room for breathes, good job.

Do watch the script a little closer when doing cold reads, some of your word ending were off. Outside of the classic gotch with entry instead of the written entrée, we added plurals sometimes, we dropped an -ed sometimes, we lost "item" in "each item sold separately". So while your delivery was steady and at a nice pace, we might want to slow down anyways so we have more time to read the script and make sure we're nailing the accuracy.

On the topic odlf mistakes, when we find ourselves fluning a line during a read, take a second, and back up to a natural break in the script to redo the messup. If we just redo the messed up word, we run into an issue where the corrected word can sound disjointed from the rest of a line that we were fixing. Looking at "purchases" specifically here.

Your projection was not bad here, I'd call it a nice 6/10 but I wanna hear you more! Fill out a gym, get the good word of the advertisement lullaby to the folks in the back! Big full belly of air, push it out with the diaphramn and project!

You have a good head for when your energy starts faltering. Some parts of the read started to loose momentum but you would realize and pick it back up the following lines. Great instinct to have, if you notice a section of your read has lost that energy, don't be afraid of rolling it back and redoing a portion with more gusto! Awesome read here, the most projection I've heard so far in reviewing and a strong start to the class!