I love your voice!! You sound great. I'd say slow down a bit so it's easier to understand

Hardcore read here, I love the smile I can hear in your read. It's pleasant, approachable, and easy going.

You mentioned it yourself but go ahead and pump the brakes a little bit. Through the whole script you were absolutely flying by. As a consequence, you pronunciation suffered a few times through the read. Some words would be cut short, slurred together, or mumbled. You have clean pronunciation otherwise, you just need to slow down and let the script breath.

Your breathes were good, I really like you taking the time to pause and take your breathes, very nice practice there.

In terms of projection, you were sitting at what I would consider a solid 5/10. Conversational but for the excercise we wanted to hear you PROJECT! Get loud and fill out a gym full of people so everyone can hear you nice and clearly. Fill up your lungs down into you abdominal cavity, push out a column of air and send the script out to the listeners!

Great read, I wanna say again how much I love the smile in your read. It's everything we do as voice actors to get people to hear the emotions we portray through our reads. We've only got our voice to evoke emotion, and you've got a fantastic joy in this read!