An excellent read all told. Measured pace, clean pronunciation, and great spacing for breaths. I will say if you were going for strong projection here, we've got a ways to go to get that volume up UP UP! We are at what I would consider a soft 3 and we wanna get you to at least a 5! If you imagine yourself trying to deliver the read to a gym full of folks, you might just about reach the front row of people on the bleachers. We want to open up your lungs down into your abdominal cavity and use that diaphragm to push out a full, continuous, strong column of air to support your read!

Additionally. whilst your pronunciation was quite good, check the script to make sure your saying the correct words! There were a few spots in the read where you missed saying the wrong word. e.g. entry vs entrée, purchase vs purchases.

You have a particularly measured pace and dictation. I would be careful to not to fall into a pattern of delivery. The pacing and softer delivery almost make you sound bored or disinterested.

Something I absolutely loved was the way you handled mistakes. Taking a second to collect yourself and backtracking to a spot that makes sense to resume the take is exactly how you ought to handle mistakes! Wonderful form and so very important in recoding since we all make mistakes at some point or another and it's important to know how to recover.

Great take here! Let's try and get some more projection out of ya and varying up that speech pattern in the coming weeks!