Love your voice! Loved that when you got to product description your voice started to slightly emphasize words. It was a solid read with strong base, but i didn't hear a character behind it. Didn't hear what is important to them, which words, phrases they cared more about. You did good! :)

A very strong read all together. You have confidence in swathes and it comes off as easy going and persuasive. I have a clear image of your character and their personality.

As for projection, one of the main focuses for this homework, we're sitting at like a 4. Comfy boardroom meeting level of volume. Like a salesman speaking to you personally trying to sell something to you. We're looking for projection that reaches the other side of a crowded gym! Letting your voice fill a vast space and reverberate off the walls! All that comes from providing more power with air and your diaphragm. For pushing more air out, imagine sending a column of air from your mouth.

You did well for the most part putting your breathes in the natural brekas in the script, make you sure to keep that through the whole read, near the end you placed a breath after "we'll include (breath) an extra added" if that happens during a read, you'll want to take a breath, back up, and start again from "we'll include". A related note, "limited time only through" was almost spoken like two different sentences and would be a good contender for a redo of that line.

Watch out for following the script and pronunciation as well. no [Entree] fee not entry, no [purchases] not purchase. Some of your words slurred together and for sake of clarity we would want to run it back to enunciate more clearly.

Very good read though, especially for a cold read. You have great sight reading ability which is an overpowered skill to have. Missing a few words and pronunciations here and there in a long script is normal, your ability to nail the majority of a long scrip is very commendable, and a skill that will come in very useful in VA.