I'm glad you asked for feedback because I've been dishing it out all day to literally everyone who has submitted whether they ask for it or not... but if by feedback you mean criticism though, I have nothing critical to say of your submission... it's very good! I like the first take on the first two lines and the second take on the last line... actually both takes on the last line... you've got the right cadence and pacing in your delivery, maybe slightly, microscopically higher pitch than what I am looking for on this particular role... but I also have a bad ear for tuning so I could be wrong... but that might be the only difference maker between yours and the submission I have sent an offer to... so thank you very much for your time and effort, I really appreciate it... you've got a voice actor's voice, for sure, I hope you didn't kill anyone to get it... but if you did, good for you... sorry I'm rambling, but I mean it, I am truly grateful! take care!