Great job with this! I love how friendly you sound and I can hear the smile on your face which gives off that happy excitement that fits for the scene! Great energy too! First, there are a few moments where your articulation gets a bit mumbled so I really want you to continue to work on articulating every part of the word. The tongue twisters are a huge help with this as well as practicing these homework scripts as the more you over articulate for practice, eventually your naturally gonna start doing it without even having to think about it. We want those words to be nice and clear regardless of the situation, unless the script calls for it to be misunderstood. Second, when you make a mistake, give yourself a moment to pause, take a breath and recoup. Allowing yourself that space gives you time to get your mind back into what you had and not rushing in without that same energy you had before you made the mistake. It is good that you didn't let the mistakes upset you and that you laughed it off, which is great! We all make them so never let them sike you out in any way. Try to look up the pronunciations ahead of time and practice saying the tricky words till you feel comfortable with them just so you can avoid any mistakes. As far as pronunciations go, Vacanti should be pronounced as "Vi-Con-Tee", but the others were good! There were also some moments where there were unnatural pauses going on where you hesitated on what to say next, so continue reading out loud and auditioning so that you can build on the skill of reading ahead better. As for the audience, I could see this in a cartoon. Being more playful and wacky can really enhance that cartoon vibe!