Love the pacing, enunciation, and expression!

Excellent read! I got a giggle out of your “no kidding!”. :D

1:42 Added “an”

Great use of variation in your read to keep things interesting and I felt you did very well with your enunciation and articulation! 

For the purpose of this homework to work on projection, I felt you did an excellent job of working on this quality. As you continue on your journey, keep working on your stamina/endurance and breath control and it will get easier. :)

I noticed a lot of gaspy breaths in between the items read, so keep practicing the SOVT exercises to increase stamina. When recording, if you find the gasping breaths start to stand out you may want to look at lowering them during editing, or leave enough room between the gasping breaths and the next words so that the audio engineer can reduce or remove them. If breaths run into the next set of words and become harder to address you may need to do some pick-ups in certain scenarios. Breath control is definitely a tool to further refine in voice acting. 

When you’re ready to take the next step to improve your voiceover recording, you will want to look into treating your recording space with acoustic foam and/or blankets to help reduce the reflections and reverb in the space. It’s not necessary for this class however as we are just focusing on the basics of voice acting.

Very well done!