You did a great job projecting your voice!(:

Really great job for your cold read! Your accent is a great addition to your voice acting toolbox. And, if you speak another language fluently, I would definitely post that on your website when you have one because that puts you ahead in the game being multilingual!

2:18 mispronounced “vinyl”.  Don’t be afraid to look up how to pronounce words online if you aren’t familiar with them. Some great reference sources include Cambridge Dictionary (https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/dictionary/), youglish.com, forvo.com and You Tube Videos among other places (there’s a lot of options out there). You can simply type in “How to pronounce [word]” in Google search and it should give you several references. 

Great job with the enunciation and articulation to fully pronounce the words clearly. Good variation in your read. To take it to the next level, there was some opportunities to perhaps include even more change-ups and variations.  

For the purpose of this homework to work on projection, I felt that you did very well with it overall - the first part could have used a little more projection. The second half of the last paragraph I really feel like you got to the point of talking in a gym setting without a mic. 

Nice work!