Voice ONE OC, cuz I need it for another RP
Shane Miws for Zephaniah Typha
Zephaniah Typha is a cringe-y OC I made quite recently and plan on incorporating into a casting call I'm joined in, but since I don't have a MAN enough voice for it I'm heading to CCC once more. Zephaniah is a normally opinionated, edgy teenager/emo, but since the RP is in a medieval fantasy like time it'll be somewhat harder to incorporate some stereotypical norms.
It's not just a phase, mom! (Optional)
What makes you so special, huh? You brought this upon yourself, so face the consequences. (Preferably blunt, but you can play with the emotions on this one)
But, mom! What do you mean you already signed me up for guards training? I told you I don't want to live that life! I want to study magic, to-to heal people, and make your lives better. You know what happens to guards, mom. They get killed. Just like dad was. (You can be an emo teen on this one with angsty-ness, but-and I know I already put but once-it is preferred to be louder at the start and sober down to a regular talking voice or smaller.)
Thank you for your WONDERFUL audition! It was amazing, incredible, stellar, awesome, you get the gist if you've seen my other comments; but...wow. I loved it. Especially how the whole rebellious teenager attitude carries on to every line said, there's just something to it that gives it more depth, almost like a front. The first line was just perfect, perfect in all its deep angst-y-ness that it almost brings a tear to my eye. It was just wow-some (wow and awesome put together), it felt like it had everything and a bit more with the deepening at the end; almost like turmoil. Actually that goes for all the lines you did! With your voice portraying Zephaniah's character it almost seems like he's putting up a front, hide your emotions and stuff, emo but also lonely in a way, frustrated maybe. It had this depth to it with each deepened phrase that it was more important, interesting. when you said "consequences" at the end of line 2 it almost gave me goosebumps from how cold it was compared to the words said before. Bluntness turned into an ENTIRELY different level and I loved it! With the slight lisp-y part in the second line it reminded me of speaking through clenched teeth and just brought another level (though I've already said that) to the part. Utterly bone chilling. The third lines has to be the most eye-catching or ear-catching in this case. The front that I've mentioned before was tense, I don't really know how to describe it but it was...like tapered and incredible in every way. The breath was completely new and added a lot. Like Zephaniah steeling up his emotions, but ultimately admitted the truth because he knew that it mattered much more to him than it did refusing the guard's training. Letting his shell crack before retreating into it (his front/disguise) and the bitterness with a smidge of frustrated guilt really got me in the ending of it. There is no doubt in my mind that your audition wasn't absolutely amazing. Clear, audible audio; sharp tone, character portrayal, just holy cow! I am once again in awe with the auditions bestowed upon me from casting call. Thank you for the audition! (again) -Grelik
Thank your compliment means a lot
Your welcome ^u^, but I should be more thankful to you! Very few people have auditioned after all...so thank you for your time and talent! -Grelik
np =)