I think you actually captured what I was going for pretty well with all three for the most part. Only slight critique I have is about some puffs I hear during certain parts in your takes. I find that if I turn my head slightly from the mic or back up a little it gets rid of it. Though that's plus the pop filter.
Ah im so sorry for the late reply. thank you so much for the feed back! I understand that it has passed the due date to reentry, but I will work on it for next time! :)