Are you open to feedback?
Yes, go ham.
It's a good audition! I'm glad someone finally auditioned for Myriam, haha. My only criticism would be in the line delivery - particularly the last one. It's a much more urgent read...but nothing some actual direction can't iron out. Nice work.
Thank you very much for taking the time to do this and for your kind words! :) Would dig getting direction if Things Happen A Good Way. I've missed projects like these, so it's exciting to see this come back to life no matter how things go. Thanks again.