I love the energy and fun with your tone! It sounds like you're really enjoying yourself and the laughs flowed together nicely and naturally. There were some articulation issues going on so really focus on making sure your words are really clear and understandable. A lot of times when people get into a character voice, the clarity of their words starts to drift, so we wanna make sure there's that balance of staying clear and understood, while also giving off that fun character voice!

For the zombie voice, I'd love to hear you get into it even more just to really make that moment pop. I like that it did sound more dull which gives that little comedic moment, but don't be afraid to play around more. Think of how you can make it stand out amongst the others!

At 1:04, there was a little flub here so just restart from the beginning of that sentence just so you don't have to deeply clean it up post (if this was an audition or project). It also gives you a chance to take a moment to reset and then start fresh with the same energy you had. Overall, I really liked this take so great job!