Nice work! There was a mixture of you really articulating on every part of the word and then moments where some ends of the words blended into the next or the T's turned to D's like in Peter, little, etc. The more you practice articulating and doing the tongue twisters, the easier it'll get and eventually you'll be able to stay consistent without having to think about it.

The audio somewhat cuts out here and there, especially at 0:23, which sounds like you cut out some space or something. No worries about making any mistakes, just try to keep everything in for homeworks just so I can hear everything from the breathing to the mistakes. If this was for an audition or project, you just wanna make sure you don't accidentally cut off any of your lines and words.

I can hear some slight tone changes to fit the emotions which is great. try to slow down a little bit so that it doesn't feel super rushed. Take your time to really hit those emotions and give the audience time to feel and absorb them and the words. Keep up with your breathing exercises, tongue twisters, and auditioning!