There are no words to describe how much I loved the way you said "bonanza" 🔥

I love how natural this sounds! You gave some nice energy and the tone was really fun and friendly. Make sure you are still articulating those words and the ends of your words. You want each word to be clearly enunciated, even if it sounds a bit choppy for this week. As you over articulate and get yourself used to that, then you can start to gradually get into a more natural flow and it'll just be ingrained in you.

I like that you took your time after a mistake to give yourself time to focus and readjust. I heard the huff after the third mistake, but again don't let them get to you. I've had moments of having to retake a line about 15 times with a director and if they're a good director, they are patient with you. Some lines just get you sometimes haha. You don't want to get yourself worked up and cause yourself to lose that energy so just take some deep breaths and continue forward! If you read this script a few times beforehand and practice before recording, it can also help you find those tricky words and you can be better prepared for them versus a strict cold read. Overall, this was great!