Nicely done! I agree that there are some words that could be enunciated more fully. Make sure you are hitting the ends of your words, like in Berret. Don't forget that T! We want to make sure the words don't bleed together and become unrecognizable. If you need to slow down slightly then that's totally fine for this week's hw!

For the zombie, I'd love to hear you change it up more so that the tone and voice is completely different from the other characters' voices. Have fun and make it unique!

You have a nice, friendly tone which is nice. Try to really dig into the emotions and scene and how you want your audience to feel. Like at biggest, baddest, etc make that big! You want people to come to Gertrude's! Give that energy and really play around with this! Keep up the great work and again, remember that when auditioning you want to try to stand out so visualize yourself fully in the words and scene and give it your all.