The projection throughout was consistent and really good! I really enjoyed this read a lot ♥ And I loved your zombie sounds! A very chill, down to earth undead. Pacing and enunciation were great and your voice sounds nice and crisp. Very good ♥

Good job with your volume and projection and speaking nice and clear! Your tone seems to stay in the same spot throughout as if you're reading the words and script versus thinking about your audience, the scene, why you're saying them, etc. We don't want your performances to sound forced. We want the audience to listen and feel like it is real and authentic, so try to visualize yourself in the scene and really bring out the emotions and how you want your character to come across as.

For your laugh in the beginning, I could tell you just read the words versus actually laughing, so really bring out that laugh and make it authentic. For the zombie, play around more! This is your chance to get silly and explore so don't be afraid to do it. If you make any mistakes, just pause for a few seconds to reset and then restart the sentence, no need to rush through. Rushing can give off that you're nervous and trying to get through and can hurt your flow.

Articulation is pretty good here so nicely done with that! Keep working on your breathing exercises and tongue twisters and I can't wait to hear more!