I love this one! The voice sounds so deranged, wild and mad scientist-esque. It had me hooked with every step of the way. The only thing I'd mention is that the first half of the file is super quiet. I had to turn my volume to the max and I was still struggling to hear it. In addition, I could hear you slowly running out of air with the "bug blood bonanza" line near the end. Otherwise, fantastic job!

On the techincal side, your gain is superrrrrrrr low here. I had to crank you up all the way and even then it's still pretty low, so check your audio levels and adjust your again so that its sitting at at least -18db. I couldn't hear your zombie except for the loudest part of it.

I love the voice and vibe you did with this! It sounded really interesting and fun. Remember not to just rely on the voice, but you want to still have some dynamics going on so that it doesn't all sound the same throughout. Focus on emotional changes and things like pacing, pauses, intensity, etc to give more of a unique spin on your take.

Your pacing I would go a bit faster, because going faster when speaking connects more to high energy, excitement, versus going slower which is more calming. Think about your audience and your goal. keep up the good work!