Hey, Carlysle. I liked the pacing that you used for this. It seemed easy to follow along with the story you were telling. Clear and consistent enunciation probably had a lot to do with that, too. Nice work, man.

Great articulation! There were some moments where I did hear you say a D instead of T like in Peter towards the middle/end, but for the overall read, you did really really well! I like that you took your time to over articulate and make sure you really hit those words. Now you can try to go a little bit faster so that it becomes more conversational and natural!

I like the subtle changes in your tone and during moments you added a bit more excitement or raised your pitch to signify that, which is important and adds to the story telling. Try to dive even more into certain moments and emotions. If Peter is sad in one moment, then make your voice convey that sadness, or if he did something amazing, then get your voice to that same level of excitement. Other than that, this was honestly a really great take, so awesome job!