You have some good volume going on here, but don't be afraid to go even bigger! You don't have much of a smile going on which then makes your pitch and tone sound more uninterested in what you're speaking about. Try smiling and using physicality like hand movements and such if possible just so you can get more energized to give it that extra excitement boost! You're really trying to get your audience interested!

Make sure you're articulating more, especially with the Bug Blood. Your words start to slur together so hit on the ends of those words and really pronounce the G and D so they don;t get lost. The GGG, you could say "G, G, G instead of triple G" but that's just a tiny nitpicking thing.

Play around with your pacing and pauses so you can have a more playful vibe versus going towards more of a formal type of read. I liked the zombie noise! Overall, great job!