Love the energy and enthusiasm! And good job handling the small slip ups! Amazing work!

There isn't any projection going on here to match the scenario given. Make sure you take in a bunch of air using your diaphragm and push out your words. Visualize yourself in the scene - gymnasium with no microphone and you need the whole room to hear you.

I really like your pacing and you sound like you're having a natural conversation which makes this very real and authentic, so nice work with that! You have a soft, friendly tone which is nice to listen to!

I can hear you running out of breath a lot so try to find breath marks and places where you can take a bigger breath that makes sense and doesn't disrupt the flow. The more you do your exercises and practice the easier it'll get!

When you made that mistake towards the end, I want you to remember you don't have to rush and slide into continuing it. Take a moment, a few seconds, to reset and the start from the beginning of the sentence. This helps so you don't lose your energy and continue at the same pace. Great work!