Love the energy and tone! I can hear a little bit of projection going on, but for it to really feel like you're in a gym with no microphone, I want you to give a lot more! Fill your lungs up with air by taking big, deep breaths and use your diaphragm to push your words out.

It sounds like you're running out of breath a bit and aren't taking big breaths when needed, so find those moments to pause, take a big breath and fill your lungs so you can get through more words without having to catch a breath. Keep doing your breathing exercises daily to help! There were also a few little hiccups, so make sure if that happens just restart from the top of the sentence so you don't have to do anything crazy. Just makes it easier haha!

Let the Spanish shine! Haha! I can hear towards the end you started to struggle slightly, but the more you practice the easier it's going to get. Read out loud every single day, audition, etc. The more you do something, the easier it becomes and soon it'll be ingrained into your being. Overall, you did a great job!