Class Session 1
Kayla Chew for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
That "WHOO" at the end summed it up! HAHA This was actually really great! The only thing I would say is to make sure you take it easy. I was rushing through this too, and I was WINDED. It's okay to take breaths in between. And if it's not, we're just gonna blame Burger's HW instructions. LOL Other than that, you did amazing! :D
Thanks haha! I know I rushed it, I kind of slipped it in while waiting for some issues to resolve in a different workshop, and I'm still recovering from getting over a cold. Thanks for the feedback! Definitely needed to breathe a bit more, but I felt that stereotypical ad salesperson slip in to just "git 'er done" haha
All good! Nah, you TOTALLY nailed the bit 100%! And I hope you're feeling better. I know there's a couple of people in our class that were getting over colds. Either way, it didn't even sound like you were sick at all. Great job! :D
I think the fact that it's a pretty fast performance gives it a lot of personality haha. Though maybe some projection was sacrificed in favor of speed so take care of that too! I get it though, I also kinda rushed through mine as I was performing it as if I was a salesman, and I was kind of exhausted by the end lol. Love it though, I really like your voice!
Slow down! I love the energy and tone you have going on, but your pacing is so fast that it's hard to keep up on exactly what is going on and what you're saying. You have to remember that if this is the first time your audience is hearing this, it may overwhelm them, so find a solid pace overall, but you can do some slight mixing in pacing in certain spots of the script if it fits well.
Try to take bigger breaths so you aren't running out of breath as much and you aren't taking a bunch of micro breaths. The pacing I believe played a big role in you losing your breath faster so slowing down will help a lot.
I can hear some projection going on which is awesome! I want you to give even more just so it fits the scene of being in a gym with no microphone. Get more air into lungs and really work you diaphragm to get those words pushed out with more volume.
You sound so passionate about what you're speaking about with the energy and tone you have which is amazing! Overall, this is a great starting point!