Your voice leans more on the soft side, and I can tell that you’re actively trying to break out of that and project more naturally. That’s great progress, and with continued practice and breath support, you’ll find a more confident and resonant delivery. Lip trills are an excellent exercise to help strengthen your breath control and projection, so keep incorporating them into your vocal warm-ups.

Keep working on projection, as it still needs more consistency and power to match the energy and setting of the script. Right now, it feels like you’re holding back slightly, but with focused practice on diaphragmatic breathing and vocal support, you’ll be able to project with ease without straining your voice.

I do like your pacing—it’s well-controlled and doesn’t feel too rushed or too slow. Your breath control is solid, allowing you to get through sentences comfortably without running out of air, and your pronunciation is clear and well-executed. These are all strong fundamentals that you’re handling well.

There are hints of change-ups and attempts to make the read feel friendly, which is great! Now, the next step is to fully embrace your choices. Right now, it feels like you’re experimenting but not fully committing to those shifts in tone and energy. Confidence in your delivery will make those variations feel more natural and engaging.

By continuing to work on projection, committing fully to emotional choices, and using breath support exercises like lip trills, your read will feel even stronger, more dynamic, and engaging. Keep up the good work. Also Godot is best Ace Attorney character