The first words heard, you said "Quality, Styles, Values" instead of "Quality, Values, Styles." Make sure during auditions or sending audio to clients that you listen back on your audio and double check to make sure everything is accurate. Of course for homework, it's ok!

I can hear you attempting to project a little, but we need a lot more to fit the scenario given so it sounds realistic!

Articulation and clarity is great! The pacing was good too.

Keep working on your breathing exercises so that you can build on that breath control. I could hear your voice losing its breath and energy at the end of some sentences. But overall, this was a great take!