Are you open for feedback?
Of course just tell me what i can do to change my voice
I'm not sure this character works for you - you'd need to go lower in pitch and a bit slower in delivery. The incidentals aren't really "hitting". The read is also a bit monotonous. Your Means audition is better but the pitch and enuniciation issues are still there. I can also tell based on the personality 2 take, the deeper gruffer voice is straining for you. I appreciate the effort though and certainly don't want to discourage you from auditioning more!