I really like this! Only two pointers, fixable easily. You have a bit of noise in the background, it's somewhat fuzzy. See if you can fix that, but if not it's something I could probably work with if I chose you. The other thing is that I think you might be using the stereotypical child way of pronouncing things? Everyone else who tries this role does it too, but it's really only toddlers that talk like that, and regular kids don't. IF that's what you are doing, try an audition without that. Kids pretty much talk like adults, just higher pitched.