Okay, most of your takes were good, but they lacked energy and were a bit too quiet. Belinda is supposed to be very outgoing and spontaneous. That might be hard to do in your current workspace without disrupting others. Also, the last two lines are where I felt you needed the most help. Especially the "Witches be trippin' line." I liked the third take, but the other two were rather weak. I'd suggest waiting until your workplace is less occupied; that way, you can be as loud as you want. I hope that helps.