Starting out, I can hear we're still speaking a bit low like before, so remember to really project your voice. For this script, think about the words and what you're speaking about. It's an ad for a new drink at Gertie's! Play around with the emotions and excitement of this brand new drink! Think about how you're playing two characters and make each completely different and stand out. I can also hear some slight hesistance in your words like you're reading the script for the first time. Remember that for your performance, you are the character and you know exactly what is going on and what you want the audience to feel. Practice a few times beforehand so that you're prepared for whats being told. Make sure you really articulate your words so that different consonants and letters don't get lost. Hit the ends of each word and those tricky letters in the middle of words so that we can hear it all nice and clearly. Take your time and give your words clarity. Tongue twisters are great practice so continue doing those as well as your daily exercises!