Nice job with your clarity and articulation! It was very easy to understand what you were saying. Now that you have that down, let's focus on the words you're speaking and emotions. Think about the character, the audience, the words, whats going on, who are you speaking to. You're trying to get people to buy this drink and come to Gertrudes! Make in known! Really sell this product and show them that you have the best drink around. You stayed in a pretty consistent tone and pitch, which can work with specific things, but for this, you want to keep your audience focused on you and your words and never waver or stop listening. Projecting more can give you more energy in your voice and more presence, changing your intensity and energy levels can bring more of a change in tone, etc. Overall you hit what this weeks challenge was, so now think about bringing it to life even more! Nice job!