Class Session 2
Holly Elara for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
very clear and the speed of your delivery was great!
Very nice, friendly voice! The pacing was natural as well which is great. I'd love to see even more focus on really engaging with your audience and convincing them why they need to buy this drink and come to Gertrudes! Projecting more can help give you more power in your voice and energy to convey just how amazing and awesome this place is. Think about your target audience and how you want them to feel about what you're saying to them. Do you want them to never come here? Do you want them to make coming here an everyday part of their lives? Do you want them to buy this drink every single day or never? There's a lot of ways you to get your message across.Your articulation is great here! There were a few small parts where the ends of the words got lost in the sentence, so just be mindful there, but overall nice work!
Thanks, Meagan! I really appreciate the detailed feedback :)