Very well done with your articulation!! The tricky T's you hit right on the dot! There were a few words scattered that were a little mumbled and jumbled together, but this was very clear!Nice job with taking in those bigger breaths, but I think you can get even more air in. there were still some moments that you couldve avoid some pausing, so try to take really deep breaths a touch faster. Again, this will get easier over time the more you practice and audition, so I trust you'll soon feel the big difference, if not already! I'd say project a little more just so it isn't super quiet. It's hitting on the edge of the asmr level realm, which is good if that was the intended audience, but think about who your audience is and what you what them to get from what you're saying. I can hear some movement going on as well, so be mindful that you aren't rubbing against the mic or anything that your mic can pick up. This doesnt matter for hw of course, but just wanted to mention in case you didnt know! Great job!