Good version

To comment on the audio quality, it definitely needs a little tuning as it was pretty hard to understand and pinpoint articulation and such. It did switch in the beginning and it does sound very boxy, but if you need some help with trying to figure it out just message in the discord and let us know so we can help ya out! But for the homework, we're not gonna worry about the audio quality and we'll comment on what I can hear. The audio was cutting in and out so it was a bit harder to figure out if you were pausing or if the audio was causing the pauses. Your tone seems to be a bit to be a bit flat and static throughout. It also sounds more like you're reading the script word for word vs performing as the character. I want you to really think about who you're playing and who your audience is. What do you want the audience to take away from this? Who is your target audience? What do they feel? What do you feel? Imagine yourself in this scene! Also, you dont have to say zombie before performing the zombie. That breaks away from the actual character and we want to be fully in. Also, if you do have a mistake, don;t continue to go on in the sentence. Take a moment, and restart from the beginning of the sentence so you have a fresh take. Practice a few times before recording so you have a better idea of what comes next and it flows better. Keep up the good work!