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Nice job! First, watch out with those T sounds turning into D's. The first Peter you said was perfect, but then the second one you replaced the T to a D in the name, so try your best to stay consistent and really articulate them, even if you have to go a little slower for this script to practice. The more the practice tongue twisters , the easier it'll be and you'll soon not have to think about whether you're articulating the consonants correctly or not. Your tone is a bit static and robotic sounding, which I believe is from you focusing on really articulating, which is awesome, but as you get more confident with it, try to make it flow more naturally and more conversational. Think about who you're speaking about and what emotions we should be feeling as the audience. Keep up the good work!