Good job! First, lets talk about your tone. You tone tends to stay static thrhoughout the whole performance with little movement and dynamics going on. This can sometimes convey that sort of uninterested tone or im reading from a script sorta vibe, so think about the words and what you want your audience to feel and give them that! You want them to feel excited? Then get excited! You can heighten your pitch a little, add more intensity to the words, throw a bunch of energy around, etc. You wanna be cheeky and goofy? Then go wild! There's no limit to what you can do to make your read unique.There was some slight issues going on with the articulation of words and them slurring together. Make sure you speak clearly and hit the ends of the words so they dont get lost into the next one. I also could hear moments of you running out of breath and losing your energy at the end of sentences, so make sure you have enough air to work with and keep that same energy throughout. Keep up the good work!